REVIEW: Drafting layout

Our review page started off as a double page spread. It was filled with about 75% writing. We decided that as it was a short film the amount of writing we had wasn't neccassary. Also towards the end of the second page we had a section where the was alot of space, we tried to add things in such as cinema dates to cover the space but it was too obvious it was there just to cover space. We decided to change it to just a single page with shortened down writing. In our first draft we also included things like 'in association with MTV' then we realised that our film wouldn't be that significant so in our final draft we changed it to our youtube page. This way it would be easier for the audience to access and find out more.

Below is the image of our first draft.



This is the image of our final draft.